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Dark Lover
Contributed by
Black13
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've burned my world now recreate it.
Tell me lies and complicate this.
I'm a child let's sacrifice me.
Cupid is a sick sadistic *****.
Bind me up just to please you.
Slit my wrists to appease your senses.
Buried my hope just to hold your hand.
On my soul your sex is poison.
Rape my mind, break me down.
Bloodied black roses adorn your gown.
Slit my throat release me now.
Didn't you know masochists burn themselves.
Please cut me just a little more.
Little girl don't stop now.
I'm inside bleeding with you.
Leaving fuchsia stains on the wall.
Lay me down but not to sleep
one more cut to make me weep.
Smile as pure as heavens end.
Clean me up so I can be beat again.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-05-11 15:38:32]
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Re: Dark Lover
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by arden on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:03:18 PM AEST
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f*ck yeah!
this was awesome, so gruesome and chilling. i loved it!
i hope i see more like this. *evil smile*
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Re: Dark Lover
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:18:05 PM AEST
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Read it. Brilliant dark work, Black. Could this be someone we know?? Huh, teddy bear?
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Re: Dark Lover
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:33:14 PM AEST
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This is too...umm, I can't say the word. I'm a good Christian girl from New England. Too much. Let's say that. I see the masochist has reared...no, let me rephrase that...has whimpered...no, that's not right...well, you get my drift.
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Re: Dark Lover
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:46:42 PM AEST
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Dark and icky full of sadness not my flavor but still an excellent write good flow and well expressed
: )
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Re: Dark Lover
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:56:53 PM AEST
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Me like . . . a lot. Well-written and sent shivers up my spine . . . good job :).
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Re: Dark Lover
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:21:00 PM AEST
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| Wow, such an impact these words had. Man, evil and sadictic. This is the epitome of dark poetry. Your words still haunt me. |
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Re: Dark Lover
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:08:42 AM AEST
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very strong..powerful..dazzling.."one more cut to make me weep.Smile as pure as heavens end.Clean me up so I can be beat again"..
great cry. venkat
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Re: Dark Lover
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:18:27 AM AEST
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| this is awesome... nothing like a little S&M to get ya going... lol nice job... :) :) :) |
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Re: Dark Lover
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:34:09 PM AEST
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| Lords of Acid ROCK!!! I asume you were refering to Dark Lover Rising. But anyway, this is beyound great! I love this. Good old S&M, takes me back...good times. |
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Re: Dark Lover
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by frohemiasweetie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:02:41 PM AEST
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| Wow. I am going to take for granted that it was meant literally and say that I hope you left that heifer alone. I like the poem, though. |
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Re: Dark Lover
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by AWaiTinG13FaTe on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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| I LOVE IT! i have thoughts like this all the time just havent put them into a poem yet. i look forward to reading you other stuff! |
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