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Losing You
Contributed by
Overstated
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:42:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stormy nights and vacant partners
Steamy windows and empty streets
Acknowledge the world
I just don’t care, because you’re everything
Earths not really there
And I’m nervous that I’m losing through
But I’m trying to be something special to you
I’ve had troubles
Travelled through and far
I’ve done great things gone real far
But I’ve had nothing, nothing like you
If you’re gold then I need more
I’ll give you heaven if you open the door
And I’m nervous that I’m losing through
But I’m trying to be something special to you
Stormy nights and vacant partners
Steamy windows and empty streets
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Overstated
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Re: Losing You
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:53:12 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write! Great job! |
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Re: Losing You
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:31:00 PM AEST
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| i honestly dont kno why i havent read this one yet.. but it states that you truly kno love |
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Re: Losing You
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:23:36 PM AEST
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this is a kool poem......its short and sweet....theres a love that u can feel as u read the poem and it makes it very enjoyable.
luv always |
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Re: Losing You
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:13:30 PM AEST
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| great poem! I can realate here. sometimes its to hard to go on without them... |
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Re: Losing You
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by scottbuttross on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:37:30 AM AEST
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| Truly a great poem that describes emotions I feel I to can relate with. |
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Re: Losing You
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:49:51 PM AEST
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| you captured the moment of this poem, i love the last two lines. |
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Re: Losing You
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:21:19 PM AEST
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Great write,very different to read.How I've felt like this before !
PumpkinPie |
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