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last day
Contributed by
spider
on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I think I'm ready so I'm leaving today
my body aches but my soul is relieved
I look at this world and think what a shame
I was never meant to have been conceived
I don’t want to be seen crying
Not today, not my last day
I don’t want you to know it hurts
That I love you in this way
Does it really matter if I leave?
Well you ever notice I’m gone?
I’ve tried so hard but I ***** it all up
I cant fix it and now I can't go on
wont you hold me for one last time?
Cuz I am relieved but so afraid
Kiss me once before I'm gone
I'm sorry your trust has been betrayed
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spider
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2004-05-11 13:45:22]
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Re: last day
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:50:38 PM AEST
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| Very good! LOVED IT! I think you should show him! |
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Re: last day
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:43:20 PM AEST
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| this distresses me. cant quite explain why. very good x |
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