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drain you
Contributed by
spider
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:32:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Drag the blade across my skin
And watch the crimson seeping out
Wonder how something so beautiful and pure
Can come from one so ugly and wrong
Intoxicated by emotion
So, I don't know how to feel
I'm angry at myself for accepting who I am
For letting myself become corrupt
Sad 'cuz I can never go back
To you or who I used to be
Push the edge deep to my arm
Try to drain myself of you
You are what kept me beautiful
And now your gone
Dragging blades across my skin
To watch your beauty seeping out
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2004-05-11 13:32:54]
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Re: drain you
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:35:04 PM AEST
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| This is wonderfully done! I got images in my head! Powerful use of words! |
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Re: drain you
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:59:04 PM AEST
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oi, powerful writing... some nice introspection going on there... great stuff you wrote! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: drain you
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:38:29 PM AEST
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| *sighs* i dont like the feeling i get from this, reminds me to much of the past. which i gotta let go lol. but still, its heart rendering. catches emotion x |
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