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Falling Stars
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:32:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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The skies black
The stars are shining brightly
But maybe this is all a fasade
A crazy mask
That makes me feel so insignificant
Against the whole wide space
Hanging over me
Like a cloud of mass destruction
Just waiting until the stars crack
And silently fall upon my skin
Like poison
Like acid
Burning their way through my body
You make wishes
Which all burns up
How can you trust what you dont know
Out there to destroy
Dont trust no-one
The stars shine brightly
But they dim just as quickly
Copyright ©
bleeding_chains
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2004-05-11 12:32:38]
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Re: Falling Stars
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:06:27 PM AEST
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| very interesting and well written poem. i liked it a lot. |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:28:23 PM AEST
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| this made a very good point i liked the metphor alot. |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:14:07 PM AEST
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peculiar way of looking at the stars, and yet this is catchy... i like this write! good stuff!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by true_poetry_writer on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:26:26 PM AEST
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thats really pretty i like that. if u wanna chat some time my msn is sweetangelkiss95@hotmail.com
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