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Love
Contributed by
Funny_Pants
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:34:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We walk into the night
through the void of lover's pleasure
and our time stops
while all else expands forever
and as we tempt fate
emptying ourselves into the stars
growing much too late
I walk to you and together what we are
is complete and growing
and I can't see beyond your face
blinding me with all
and even the way you taste
finding myself at the end
of all space and time
I'll walk with you tonight
in hope that we will find...
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2004-05-11 11:34:48]
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Re: Love
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:15:48 PM AEST
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| great romantic write. i love it. |
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Re: Love
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:43:51 PM AEST
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i loved the discriptive langauge i hope you write a conclushion
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Re: Love
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:36:51 PM AEST
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*grins* aww... pretty, and cute too... i love it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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