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Jaded
Contributed by
loopylou
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:46:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im jaded
jaded by the sun
jaded by it rays
and everyone
you may think
and you may say
but since im
JADED
ill like you anyway
i only see the innocence
the same innocence kills me
makes me hurt
the same innocence
treats me like dirt
i do not understand
why the suns in my eyes
why i end up with sun burn
why its always me who crys
the wind whispers its problems
sweeps them back to me
oh why
oh why
am i jaded by the only light i can see
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2004-05-11 05:46:47]
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Re: Jaded
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:50:28 AM AEST
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Scraping my heart, but wonderful...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Jaded
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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brilliant work!
ok I think the flow here is magnificent and goes along ever so smoothly.
it's a creative and a fresh new view of things like that...
very unique I have to say.
Outstanding and awesome work!
*thumbs up*
13 year old girl with thoughts of the sun and light and being jaded and all other sorts of things spinning around in her head...,
katie |
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Re: Jaded
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by bluoreo on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:27:35 AM AEST
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i dont know how that feels but i certainly have an idea now. awesome write.
-eric |
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Re: Jaded
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:32:06 AM AEST
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good question!
and very, very good poem. this s brilliant!! |
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Re: Jaded
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:13:10 AM AEST
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Bravo! This a way we all feel at times in our lives. Well spoken words!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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