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Broken Promises
Contributed by
Black13
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:21:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I placed my whole life in your hands
but your jaded resolve broke my heart.
Left to pray for the love you swore to be true.
Slept in your arms entrusting my dreams to you.
And my broken dreams drown out my hope
as my hollow heart freezes over.
Now I find I've no life left to speak of.
Praying left me with only bruised knees.
I spent so many wasted nights awake
and comfort only came from empty bottles.
Dreams are corrupted and I feel low.
Trying to fill a void with unloved lovers.
Nightmares are haunting my memories of our past.
Forgetting who my tongue shared passion with last night.
No need for names when your own escapes you.
Hoping to pass young with black roses on my grave.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-05-10 23:21:50]
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Re: Broken Promises
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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| Sad and passionately dark..tongue shares the passion yet keeps black roses on a grave..oh..this is heart breaking.. venkat |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:25:57 AM AEST
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A very sad piece you got there,
good job on the poem :) |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:49:48 AM AEST
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Oh Black....you're tearing me to peaces with this write.. so full of emotions ....
Hugs and thanks
Jenni |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:45:13 AM AEST
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What a picture of loss and despair, and yet a vibrant and moving painting.
Stitch |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:21:12 PM AEST
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so sad but sooo beautiful............ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Broken Promises
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:30:44 PM AEST
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| very sad but very beauifully written. great job |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:20:36 AM AEST
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| you did a nice job on this one... def. a lot of emotion behind your words.... :) :) :) |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:14:08 PM AEST
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an awesome poem buddy. I loved it so expressive and well written.
I spent so many wasted nights awake
and comfort only came from empty bottles.
I loved those two lines. It was good to read another of your poems.
Bobo (Joel) |
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