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Again
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Papery ashes
Fall
Slowly
Scerenely
The world
Is spinning
Just above
The ground
My heart
Too
Is Slowly
Stopping
I can't
Breathe
...
Again
Why Can't I
Scream out
To clear
The air?
To free me
Of this
Hellish
Burden?
My voice
Simply
Congeals
Into a sob
A sloppy
Incoherent
Noise
Polluting me
I can't
Breathe
...
Again
Closing
My eyes
I focus
On the past
On days
Of no
Fears
Or worries
I break
Everything
Down
Into nothing
Until
It all fogs
And eventually
Disappears
I can't
Breathe
...
Again
The last
Of my ashes
Fall
To the floor
The last
Of my sanity
Floats
Away
I am
Left
With nothing
Again
Nothing
Overwhelms
Me
Again
I can't
Breathe
...
Again
Copyright ©
Adreana
... [
2002-10-07 08:30:00]
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Re: Again
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by trinity_love500 on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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I really like the way you've done this, form wise, the awkwardness of short lines shows your emotion. Ever considered makin it into a song? Could be worth a thought...
Nice write,
Trinity L |
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Re: Again
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by Butterat_Zool on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 01:47:58 PM AEST
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| Great imagery, buddy... how's life? |
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