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Nonsense On A Sober Mind
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:08:47 PM in AEST
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The shadows composed of dreams.
The ones that redeem their selves in your sleep.
The kind that fondles the back of the mind.
In time they wont pass.
But the end is the end.
The bottle is empty now.
All I have is my pen.
My pen is me.
For I use my tool to carry my trait.
Never again shall I sedate.
Thinking about everything you hate.
Wondering why im on your list.
Thinking of summer and its bliss.
Wishing for love.
Hoped for later.
Pick a number in the rain.
Mix ice cream on a train.
Throw a rock in the sea.
Smell the lemons on the tree.
For lifes moments hold us well.
Theres one story I'll never tell.
One of hope.
One of things.
And Just everything between
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Mortis-Dark
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Re: Nonsense On A Sober Mind
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by a_bear on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:14:24 PM AEST
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my mind is sober too and always filled with nonsense...
LOL well, until recently. Good poem. |
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Re: Nonsense On A Sober Mind
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by aom on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:00:48 AM AEST
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| those first five lines are rich and your euphonies inventive...I wouldn't deem it "nonsense" at all...sobriety can be the most inebriating state of being at times...thanks for sharing!! |
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Re: Nonsense On A Sober Mind
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:18:03 AM AEST
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so true man so true...i'm sober now too...i miss not being sober...
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