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Unanswered Love Question's

Contributed by carebear on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 09:08:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Many flaws in love never to keep the,
Hearts parts together for very long.
A lot of tears to shed so many reasons to hurt,
Falling to the floor afraid to get up,
Burnt out from heartbreak worn out from his lies.

Blood around the moon soon another love is doomed,
Shall he break her heart leave for another's love?
Tender kind words just wont be enough.
Counting your ever blessing on the stars above,
Wont be prays to save unloved loves nothing is more
Worse then feeling words of anger, hurt and disbelieve
Thrown in your unprotected heart.

Sea turning dark red floating above are
bits of shattering, bleeding hearts,
Nothing to stop the dreams from coming,
Wind blowing in her air she has nothing to compare
How deeply she feels for him still should he love
Another? why are so many things in love hard to understand?
Lacing his hands with hers was something special, now its nothing more then a lie.

Ghosts of darkness haunt the whole room,
Whispering voices take a hold of her cries painting them all over the walls the floor like a river,
of endless tears beyond her wildest fantasy,
A rose blooms in the middle of the room,
Simple, small just a drop of blood how can this be,
The end of love? he says he loves her yet soon enough,
He isn't sure not wanting to lose her only to love,
Her forever nothing can really move if they arn't
Meant to be.

Toward the blue twilight stars shot across the
Sky her last and final time to pray or lose her love,
Closing her eyes she silently whispers the prayer,
Inside her head help her find the way to a better place,
Why dose love have to be so hard?
Can't it just be like,
One of those shooting stars bright, high up in the sky?
Why can't it be as light as a father or a leaf in the
Fall falling from the tree? dose she have to bleed?
Why must she cry when guys break her heart sometimes she even
Wants die cause she’s loved him so much.

© Care 5/8/04

Copyright Â© carebear ... [ 2004-05-10 21:08:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unanswered Love Question's (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:20:32 AM AEST
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A broken heart is sometimes worse than a broken Leg! The pain is hard to bare!
Well done poem! Christina

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