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don't talk, just shoot

Contributed by Cancer on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:55:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



they'll run you down
if you let them
corner you
and force you to
wrap it all up
into a neat new package
labeled with a trendy new disorder
if you let them

if you let them
they'll help you blame all your problems
on someone else
doesn't matter who
just as long as you both can agree
that it's not your fault
and as long as you're willing to pay

everyone you meet
is just trying to ***** you
in one way or another
that's why you must stop speaking
shut them out completely
and heed these words

don't talk, just shoot

if their mouth is open
put a bullet in it
don't wait for them
to brainwash you
everything your eye can see
is cosmic propaganda
it's all a lie
to bend you to
the will of those you cannot see

you are alone
no one can help you
so YOU must decide
what YOU will do

don't talk, just shoot

even i am out to screw you
this is all a backwards mask
my words are layers of subliminal messages
second guessing your fears
of reverse psychology
i'm preying on phobias
that you don't know you have
and you'll never have to know
unless you let them speak

don't let them

don't talk, just shoot




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2004-05-10 20:55:49]
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Re: don't talk, just shoot (User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 09:01:09 PM AEST
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very good read... you think kinda like me as far as i cant tell


Re: don't talk, just shoot (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:47:36 AM AEST
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I have been neglecting you... and I'm only hurting myself! I think you're my good twin...hehe... the better of two evils...lol... I absolutely adore this! If I could add a book of poetry to my collection of books, I'd want it to be yours.


Re: don't talk, just shoot (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:01:01 AM AEST
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amazing...




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