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Contributed by
Hecate-
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:11:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Another pensive, cold stare at the tiled floor
And another blast of icy fear rattles the door
Will you be all right, just curled up and shaking?
I watch you, from unbelievably far away
You can't conceal your fears in your trademark disarray
And though I'm so far gone can I still help?
If I could reach out and slay your demons
And if I could make all of your evil qualms flee
Why, after that, would you even need me?
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Re: Questions
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:03:15 AM AEST
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Blown away by the deepness of the words and meaning in your poem. Simple and few words- worth their weight in gold. Well Done!
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by Spike on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:49:12 AM AEST
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Hmmm. This one caught me by surprise. Well written, elusive subject matter - stormy relations, personal demons, utilitarianism - what am I if I am not useful to you, even destructively useful?
Well done, Goddess of the crossroads.
Spike
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