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Standing in the Rain
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:17:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Sensing the clouds roll in, I turn slowly.
My eyes begin to sparkle as I smile.
Sprinting spiritedly out the front door.
The sound of bare feet blends with sounds of rain.
Raindrops splattering through the windblown leaves,
Drumming on the ground and bouncing off my skin.
The sprightly wind swirls about my being.
The thin fabric of my shirt clings to me.
My hair melts as it soaks relaxingly.
My jeans take on the weight of every drop.
The wooden porch I stand on puddles up.
Giggles of delight mingle in the air.
Thunder cracks causing my smile to widen.
Neon scribbles scrawl across the marbled clouds.
The air is clear and I can breathe freely.
I step inside but cannot keep away.
Blissful laughter escapes impulsively.
Everything is right standing in the rain.
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liquidsunshine
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Re: Standing in the Rain
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by Justalady on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:28:27 PM AEST
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What a delightful refreshing poem. One with nature when she is in all her glory. I can easily see why ......Everything is right standing in the rain. June
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Re: Standing in the Rain
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:31:49 PM AEST
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I really loved this one..It made me imagine everything in a very vivid way,I love thunderstorms as well,it's so relaxing and peacefull.You described each scene beautifully and I'm glad I got the chance to read this.
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Re: Standing in the Rain
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:28:35 PM AEST
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Ah... the rain. Wonderful stuff it is! I too feel a sense of peace and joy in it. A few days ago I was working out here in Oregon, digging, grubbing in the dirt with a shovel. It was raining lightly, but I was in the woods, and it was dry under the trees. But looking across the meadow, and seeing the trees on the other side, dim and misty with that soft sheet of rain falling... magical. I love it.
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Re: Standing in the Rain
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:34:53 PM AEST
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There is something so cleansing in rain. I too like to stand in it and let it take the pain of life away. I really enjoyed this one, thank you
Very well done
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Re: Standing in the Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:15:33 AM AEST
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absolutely delightful to read, i love rain too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Standing in the Rain
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:30:37 PM AEST
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Hang it all! Why do I have to live in California?! The only rain we get here is on TV... A great poem.
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