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Fate By The Day
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:54:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sitting and watching the sun go down
Fading over the mountains peak
It’s no longer bright
A brilliance of gray
Doomed from the beginning
It was ment to happen
Fate had been stepping in all along
The darkness was here and the
Brightness was gone.
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pyrofungus
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2004-05-10 18:54:49]
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Re: Fate By The Day
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:22:07 AM AEST
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| Short but well writen! Christina |
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Re: Fate By The Day
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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| excellent. |
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Re: Fate By The Day
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by Seikjo on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:26:20 PM AEST
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| Oh no the world is ending!! Just joking. Nice write, short and not to sweet. |
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