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Pills
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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pills in every shape,
Different symptoms,
Feelings stop,
Emotions stop,
Heart rate slows,
Breathing becomes more short,
Life flashes before you die,
All the good times,
All the bad times,
Wait,
No,
I don't want to go yet,
I just took some pills,
Can't stop this I guess,
Laying on the floor,
My death,
Is Inevitable,
I wish I could tell everyone that I didn't mean
to go this way,
Why did I have to do this to myself,
I regret doing this,
But it's the only way to stop this feeling of
emptiness inside,
To stop all this pain inside,
To end this lonliness.
Me,
This is me at the end,
My last breath,
It draws near,
Ending my pain,
But bringing more.
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2004-05-10 17:55:12]
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Re: Pills
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:08:41 PM AEST
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| my best friend went that way...i guess pills have a way of getting to you |
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Re: Pills
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by blackmarker on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:18:51 PM AEST
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| Wow.. Powerful.. I love the last two lines, "Ending my pain, But bringing more".. wonderful. Great job. |
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Re: Pills
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by bite_me on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:41:01 PM AEST
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| W o W!!, that's really good. Jus hope your ok!.. |
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Re: Pills
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by Princesaazul16 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:28:05 PM AEST
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| This is very deep. I liked it a lot, but if you need to talk, im here.. -Stace- |
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Re: Pills
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:15:19 PM AEST
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| I hope that you are ok and arent thinking of doing this. I think you did a really nice job, and hope you will keep on writing. - Stacy |
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Re: Pills
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by xxapples on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:12:34 PM AEST
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| I've been thinking of doing this a lot lately... It's a really great poem. |
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