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It's all I can do..
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:46:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It’s all I can do
To make it through the day
A smile on my face
Though my skies are gray
It hurts so much
To make it through the day
Without revealing my sadness
But my eyes betray
It’s all I can do
To make it through the day
The looks I get wound me
More than I can say
It hurts so much
To make it through the day
When you’re not near
And I can’t make you stay
It’s all I can do
To make it through the day
I cry inside when I see you
These feelings I can’t allay
It hurts so much
To make it through the day
Don’t want to make it anymore
Just want to die and decay
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2004-05-10 17:46:52]
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Re: It's all I can do..
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:05:44 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt poem,very sad and very beautifully written.I do hope the clouds will disappear and the sun will shine through your heart and let all the beauty in,you sound like a beautiful person yourself,don't worry,I'm sure your heart will heal and hopefully things will get easier on you.
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Re: It's all I can do..
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:25:24 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written, filled with a lot of emotion, the main thing....we all can make it through just one more day, even if it's just a moment at a time.
Blessings
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Re: It's all I can do..
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by Princesaazul16 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:31:26 PM AEST
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| This is very strong and deep. I liked it a lot. You did a very good job expressing your emotions. Life is hard for everyone. But life is a test, to see if you can last. So hang in there. People are here if you need them, if you need to talk, i'm here too. Good luck. ~Stace~ |
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