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five again
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Five again,
Little girl grin
And wicked.
Innocence
Like wishing for Santa
Without asking.
It's beautiful
This reminder
And simple.
The payment in kind
Is neath the pillow!
This is sweet,
This is easy,
This is all, I know,
It should be.
Five again,
Any time
Wander deep into,
Smile, Happy,
Complete.
Then multiply
To watch the years
Roll into reality
And maintain
No more...
But charm regained.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-10 16:43:19]
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Re: five again
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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i love this write. so well done. beautifully written. keep up the awesome work.
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Re: five again
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:40:27 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, you captured the true nature of being five, I believe I can remember that far back....lol
Blessings
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Re: five again
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:04:14 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem, although personally speaking I have no wish to see my childhood again |
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