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Go away
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:53:48 PM in AEST
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i've been listening
listening to all the things
you have to say
about ME, about MY life
but you're just on the sidelines
you don't see what i see
you don't hear what i hear
you don't feel what i feel
you're not in the game
in your eyes
everything i do is just a mistake
i can do better
i can do great
but you just don't understand
how can i do better
with you always in my face
i can't
i won't
i just want to be left alone
i'll do better
when you do better
at leaving me be, and going away
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pyrochick
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2004-05-10 15:53:48]
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Re: Go away
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:49:27 PM AEST
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That's exactly how I feel about my mom a lot of times. It'd be great if instead of trying to always pretend like they understand, that they could just sympathize or encourage....and if they can't do that, then to just leave us alone. I like your poem, it shows your emotion. Good job. Keep pressing on.
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Re: Go away
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by BinkCaesar on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:53:22 PM AEST
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Hmm I've had that feeling a lot lately, but it's good to know that she's there when i really need her. Hope yours is too.
--Caesar |
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