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Leave this world behind.
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:35:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i want to leave this world behind
No more pain No more tears
No more trying to impress people
i can’t go on putting on different faces
i need someone to lean on
i come to you to help me
Take away the pain
Love me
i can’t go on without you
Please come comfort me
i don’t have the strength to go on
Give me hope
Please
i can’t go on with out you
February 3rd 1999
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lil_angel
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2004-05-10 14:35:47]
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Re: Leave this world behind.
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:09:42 PM AEST
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| I feel the desperation in your piece. Well done |
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Re: Leave this world behind.
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:11:03 AM AEST
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Poem that is desperately wanting the love of a special person. Good reading.
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Re: Leave this world behind.
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:19:31 PM AEST
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Wow, Cece . . first of all, applause :). Nicenicenice work and you conveyed that feeling very well . . . I could identify with part of this myself. The
"i can’t go on putting on different faces
i need someone to lean on"
part . . . well, yeah. Super good job and hugs to ya, even if/though you no longer feel this way :).
--Nora |
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