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I am
Contributed by
cheech
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:16:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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apart of me is gone,its hard to move on
seeing you everyday me off,everytime
i turn around i see you,you're so happy
its been so long without my dad by my side
he's never been there while i've cried
i've been trying to survive
i guess i'm doing real good cuz i'm still alive
living here i am so pathetic,(it's ok)
living here i am so crazy,(each day)
living here i am so up,(it's ok)
some dirty was my friend,i'll
never admit that ever again,Hey
shut your ugly face and your legs
the man of my dreams will never understand
just how much i wanna hold his hand
even just for one night,is that ok?
let me know so i can walk away
living here i am so pathetic,(it's ok)
living here i am so crazy,(each day)
living here i am so up,(its ok)
day to day it gets harder and harder
to live in this society,i'm so proud
i haven't let go yet,but i think me
letting go is gonna happen soon
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cheech
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2004-05-10 14:16:40]
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Re: I am
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:22:25 PM AEST
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| Life happens good and bad, I hope you don't let go because you would miss the good part. |
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Re: I am
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:37:47 PM AEST
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| Great write! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: I am
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:44:56 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem, (no gratitous use of the word love :)lol)
I loved the repition or chorus it really empazed the power of the poem, and it kinda sticks in ur head |
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Re: I am
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:56:33 PM AEST
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Makes perfect sense to me.
very good writing.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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