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Light's Lies
Contributed by
Black13
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:11:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In the fading flames of my tormented spirit's shame.
Surrendering the final fragments of my wasted existance.
My agony governs me and is all I've ever known.
Chased to ground and beaten down by those that surround.
Still, my eyes won't moisten and only one way for release;
The knife mimics back sorrowful eyes and paltry smiles.
It's kiss, though is a harmonic serenade resonating in my flesh.
A sultry temptress that seduces promising escape.
Eyes close as life is emptied from a cup once full,
as a silver lover dances hypnotically over flesh.
Controlled by fascination as realization numbs away the pain.
Hope didn't save, love beats it's slaves, and joy won't endure.
For all the lies that light told prolonging pain
this knife dispelled with deep gashes realeasing me eternally.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-05-10 14:11:17]
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Re: Light's Lies
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:18:44 PM AEST
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ohhh i like this one alot.
really dark and chilling. great use of words. this was bloody awesome.
well done.
Arden
and about time you posted...sheesh... |
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Re: Light's Lies
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by UnfallenTears on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:26:34 PM AEST
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| This one sent chills. Very good write |
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Re: Light's Lies
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:29:00 PM AEST
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| I hope that what ever it is that is making you feel like this will go away. No one needs to live in the dark and love never fails if you know where to look for it. |
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Re: Light's Lies
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:06:49 PM AEST
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| Well done , very chilling. |
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Re: Light's Lies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:07:49 PM AEST
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Great piece of work. Words flowed smooth like water. I detest the subject but have to tell you that I do enjoy your work.
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Re: Light's Lies
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:27:14 AM AEST
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Dark, powerful, agonizingly sad. Tough stuff coming from a Teddy.
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