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The Puppet
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:34:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am a puppet, that has no strings
A life size mannequin, some creators plaything
Who toys with my mind, controls my soul
Keeps me in this game, keeps me in this role
My feelings aren't mine, they're made up for me
Injected in my mind, then left to burst free
My creator looking down, smiling with delight
At this puppet, that has no fight
So I stumble along, the path I've been given
Not part of life, not even living
In total control, my creator will stay
Until this puppet, just snaps one day
Copyright ©
parkman
... [
2004-05-10 13:34:05]
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Re: The Puppet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:47:05 PM AEST
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Dang! And I thought only *I* felt this way! Way to go in expressing what we all feel like 99% of the time!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: The Puppet
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by UnfallenTears on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:04:06 PM AEST
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| Wow... this was really good. |
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Re: The Puppet
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:11:55 AM AEST
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| An awesome write ... your words speak volumes! Jan |
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Re: The Puppet
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by starlight4215 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:31:28 AM AEST
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| Wow !! Excellent as always. ~ Star x |
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