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(don't need this, can't handle)
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"And yet your words so intriguing
upon cold dark lips of intrusion
tell me once more what its like
to be so shattered and needing
love of being alone..."
Slightly contrary,
whilst shivering inside myself,
my darkness overwhelms, and
the outside world of light
so alien, so intruiging
atttracts...
longing, yearning
Yet repulsion tenfold,
people, humans, interaction,
cannot handle, this
So caught in this paradox,
physical body, cognizant mind torn in two...
leave me alone, now
give me love, now
let me die without you all...
(don't need this,
can't handle)
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-05-10 12:58:54]
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Re: (don't need this, can't handle)
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully done! Excellent job! |
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Re: (don't need this, can't handle)
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:28:10 PM AEST
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| why the **** did some one vote 2/5 *pulls an angry face* retards... to even the odds im doin fine, i was goin to do a 4/5 but some retard voted 2 so it wont look good.... |
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Re: (don't need this, can't handle)
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:38:01 AM AEST
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"And yet your words so intriguing
upon cold dark lips of intrusion
tell me once more what its like
to be so shattered and needing
love of being alone..."
beautiful, full of sadness. i san sense something deep in this...i dont know what it is though. i love the way you want to push people away, but you dont want to be alone....a feeling that i also know. good write. phil x |
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