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Drowning
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:34:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Feeling lifeless and dead
I can't take it anymore
When Death comes a knocking
I don't want to hit the floor
I'v reached a point of no return
Of where that is, it's sure not home
Sitting in a room, with faces full of bloom
But it makes no odds to me, as all im feeling is thick gloom
I'm on a roller coster
The world is spinning round
And all I want to do, if for my feet to touch the ground
I cannot stop the spinning or the laughing joy
For what am I to do, except fall deep on you!
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2004-05-10 12:34:48]
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Re: Drowning
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by shelby on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:43:41 PM AEST
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this poem tugs at the heart strings well done
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Re: Drowning
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by arden on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:29:07 AM AEST
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full of deep dark emotion. this was amazing. perfectly done. i loved this. keep it up youve got talent.
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