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Accidental death
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i watched you waste
waste away
now i watch you
decay
decay that bad smell remains
rotting
rotting with your body down the lake
your fragile body never to wake
you scar
my body
my heart
your scars ripped at the seams
tear my heart apart
gone were the days when the ripple lied still
the day i thought it was over
when i buried you in that dirt hill
it all was a broken promise
so now my heart i spill...
i never meant to kill...
too see you gone
it was just a fight
a fight gone wrong
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-05-10 11:56:09]
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Re: Accidental death
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:00:04 PM AEST
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| Really good job! Emotional, and thats good! |
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Re: Accidental death
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:57:10 PM AEST
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This could also be listed as dark! This has alot of emotion in it...leading to a grand conclusion!
Great write!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Accidental death
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:55:10 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE. |
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