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Epiphany
Contributed by
Tanna
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:02:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the light slowly dies, my mind begins to expand
This epiphany making me numb
Cherished deception forged from my own hand
In the midst of deafening silence, sleep refuses to come.
Rejecting ingrained religious belief
But habitually drawn to the cross at my neck
Trembling with grief, seeking relief
The world around me is a wreck.
With empty eyes and sunken cheeks
My fingers caress the crimson flow
It’s my demise as lifeblood seeps
This should have ended long ago.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2004-05-10 10:02:35]
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Re: Epiphany
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:18:06 AM AEST
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This is very good for having writer's block almost a year... I think your block has
completely smashed to bits and pieces.
Thank you for sharing! |
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Re: Epiphany
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by UnfallenTears on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:27:48 AM AEST
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| It is very good. I like the way you ended it. I can't say much else, but very nice writing. |
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Re: Epiphany
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:23:37 AM AEST
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| So glad to see you back Tanna, I've been away myself and its great to read your poetry again ... something tells me by this write that you definitely don't have writer's block anymore :))) Jan |
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