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The Waiting.
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:42:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The waiting.
Staring at the esoteric, turquoise sky,
Watching silently, as clouds go by,
Greeting the dawn of the yellow moon,
Hoping darkness would befall soon.
Second by second, my shadow is declines,
Laughing heartily, at the thinning sunshine,
For nightfall is what I mostly adore,
Where it is pleasant as the evening seashore.
And at last my pleasure is fulfilled,
As I hear the sun’s last shrill.
Daylight has gone, and the night has come,
The night & me are now one.
-Thivanka
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Thivanka
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2004-05-10 06:42:37]
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Re: The Waiting.
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:46:35 AM AEST
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i too love the night. so peaceful and calming.
i loved this write. the flow was so smooth and the imagery was so stunning. perfectly done. keep it up.
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Re: The Waiting.
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by Princesaazul16 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:48:51 AM AEST
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| oOo! I like this poem a lot. I liked how you used a lot of different beautiful colors! Keep up the good work! -Stace- |
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Re: The Waiting.
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by bernard on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:19:12 AM AEST
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Late evening is always a wonderful time to be looking for the setting sun and the first stars to shine. A new moon enhances the scene. Thank you for a good read.
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