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X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
Contributed by
steeleyes
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:31:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Let down
Yes, you've been let down
Right down
To the ground
It's a come down
All around
Yes, it's a come down
I think you've found
They told you it was about freedom
About dignity in war
They told you it was a noble fight
All the good things it was for
They told you to be proud
Of all these things they do
That they were selfess warriors
Going into battle just for you
It was a showdown
Between a beast and clown
In a showground
Burning down
Let down
Yes, you've been let down
Right down
To the ground
They took your country
And drove it in the ditch
As they lied straight to your face
To cure their warmongering itch
Now the face of your country
Has a dirty sleazy leer
X-rated military porno
Replacing fear with fear
You've been let down
By a so-called president
By an air-head clown
You've been let down
Right to the ground
Copyright ©
steeleyes
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2004-05-10 03:31:51]
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:35:45 AM AEST
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*raises eyebrow @ anonynoo*
Having actually read your poem, Steel, i found it to be very competently written, very rhythmic and totally political.
5 stars. |
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by bernard on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 09:35:03 AM AEST
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I agree with the facts in this well written poem. I think that the US of A , If all that we read and see is true then the ordinary soldier has been badly let down. Was the oil such a big temptation?
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by shelby on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:58:52 PM AEST
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Yes I feel your right and this has been an out right shame because many of our soldiers are above and beyond what has occured it sickened me. I still support our soldiers ( except that sick few who were touched in their heads but I nolonger accept our president and will be glad for elections once again. Im tired of being lied to
Michelle |
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:26:25 PM AEST
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Oh c'mon, Steeleyes. Just because Donald Rumsfeld spanks the monkey to those photos doesn't make it porn!:)
But I have some good news (and no it's not about car insurance). Bush's approval rating is down to 46%. Hooray!
Still, I really do wonder why 4.6 out of 10 Americans still like the bastard. |
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:27:22 PM AEST
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| Oh yeah and, good write:). |
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:24:20 AM AEST
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| I read the poem and I thought it was good. You explained how you and many other Americans feel. I believe something needs to be done about this before it happens again. ~Stace~ |
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:18:49 AM AEST
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This so called battle for 'freedom' in the Middle East has left many nations reeling with disgust, my own, the UK, included... It seems democracy has been thrown aside in favour of oil, a three letter word that means the earth to Bush and Blair, a shame that the most powerful nation on earth is being run by a clown, and that the UK's PM is just the monkey willing to follow... an excellent poem, with a very strong and important message.
Tuesday x |
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Re: X-RATED MILITARY PORNO - LET DOWN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 12:33:39 PM AEST
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| I totally enjoyed this poem. |
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