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jaz17
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:02:43 AM in AEST
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Loved you so pure, didn't alter my pain
watching you bleed, some strength I regain
Hate born of love, distant dreams of forever
my passion for you, in death us together
Rip out your heart, laugh as you cry
Speak what I think, you fade and you die
Tear out your insides, leave laughter behind
Kick you and break you and blacken your mind
Kiss you so tender, feel nothing inside
you scream in anguish, I come to life
Hate you with everything left in my heart
this hate is my love, we never shall part...
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Re: No Title
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:13:28 PM AEST
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| a very discriptive and dark poem. |
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by reprobate on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:24:16 PM AEST
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for a title, how about 'permanent revelation'? good read.
thanks for sharing |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 07:12:58 AM AEST
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god this is stunning...so, so beautiful...
liss honey i don't know if you use this site anymore. i just, i miss you. a lot. wherever you are and whatever you're doing, i hope you're happy. you have a beautiful soul and don't ever sacrifice that. thinking of you...
kisses, love. lucie xxx |
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