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Song of a Son
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venkat
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:57:54 PM in AEST
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No body equals my mother
No song is sweeter than her word
Nothing is greater than her blessing
She is my goddess for ever
Sharing her flesh and blood
She brought me into this world
Sharing her love from heart
Brought up me on her breast
Gave me food of knowledge
Showed me beauty of the world
showered her nectarine love and
Taught me to stand up on my feet
Taught me words of sweetness
Caressed my mind and heart
Cleansed my body and soul
Kissed me like her life breath
Helped me to learn walks of life
Looked after my needs in child hood
Looked at me as I was light of her eyes
Treated me like her treasure of gold
To me always she is mother of world
She is the goddess of grace and holy spirit
There fore my salutations ever be to her!
9-5-2004
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:03:08 AM AEST
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Venkat,
That is beautiful and so sweet! Your mother must be a very special woman.
Blessings to you, friend
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:07:41 AM AEST
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A beautiful tribute. Mothers are the solidity of this world.
Rita |
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by mountainhigh on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:27:14 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, your Mother has given the world a sweet voice that is a healing sound. She may be so proud of her good son.
Thank you for yet another inspiration my friend. |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:40:12 AM AEST
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this is purely beautiful, i really love this venkat, it warms my heart:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:26:58 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem, words like this help me to come to terms with the loss of my parents, thankyou for sharing.
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Thivanka on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:21:58 AM AEST
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Your mother is lucky to have a poetic son like you, I like the way you go on with this buisiness, Nice work again, Venkat!
-Thivanka |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:01:35 AM AEST
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| Venkat, this brought tears to my eyes. What a beautiful Mother's Day poem this is. Excellent. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:18:30 AM AEST
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SHE IS BEAUTIFUL IN YOUR EYES.
BEAUTIFUL WORDS from your heart
spoken with truth from your soul. good write. |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:27:59 AM AEST
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Oh Venket...this priceless poem brought a tear to my eyes..... Loved it...
Will post my poem later on this evening..
Jenni |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:09:24 AM AEST
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wonderful dedication and you are a shining example of her love
Shari |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Black13 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:39:03 AM AEST
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This was a sublime dedication to the very word of mother.
Incredible, sir Venkat.
Perfect. |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by shelby on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:23:11 AM AEST
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what would we be without our mothers? Venkat your divine love and respect shines through this poem and we all see what a pillar of beauty and strength she has been in your life.Beautiful
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:34:48 AM AEST
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Wonderful, a true mother's day poem!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:31:58 AM AEST
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| Venkat, you have the ability to write words that flow like honey ... this dedication to your mother is something I'm sure she will always treasure - a beautiful tribute for Mother's Day ... Jan |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:19:03 AM AEST
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I bet you write with a feather. I picture you dipping your quill into a well of india ink, where something magical and familiar drips from your pen in hand.
Once again, excellent write and a pleasure to read! |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by arden on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:54:59 PM AEST
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such a beautiful and caring write, so full of love.
a truely great poem.
well done.
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 04:56:27 PM AEST
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No wonder you have such a great outlook on life. With a mother like yours, what else could you have? Your childhood must have been wonderful and full of love. Sigh....... Excellent write,as usual. ; 0 )
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Re: Song of a Son
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:00:48 AM AEST
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| what a nicely done dedication... she sounds like a wonderful woman :) :) :) |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Archie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:15:57 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem Venkat. This reminds me of some of the things I would want to say to my mother. |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:06:19 AM AEST
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Venkat you came from a woman
a woman of the earth, making you earthly
and you do not forget that |
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Re: Song of a Son
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 12:07:12 PM AEST
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| This is a great tribute to your Mom. These words carry great sentiments of gratitude. You truly write with a lot of wisdom. |
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