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suicidal soul
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:44:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Right now i feel my life is not worth living anymore.
I feel like crying but the tears wont come...
I feel like pounding something but i cant draw the strength.
I feel like killing something but i cannot find the courage.
I feel like dieing but i cannot draw the blade with confidence.
I feel like having fun but i cannot do so because the world wont let me.
I feel like having a heart but i cant draw the compassion...
I feel like caring but cannot come with an untortured spirit.
Im depressed, enraged, and crazed right now.
I want to kill, slash, and burn my life of crying out.
I will die not of the natural but of the blade i drew..
My blood will flow from the veigns of me, cut and dead I lay
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2004-05-09 21:44:24]
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Re: suicidal soul
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 10:44:07 PM AEST
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Intresting read.....I want you to know that there is hope.!
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Re: suicidal soul
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:07:05 PM AEST
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Good write! - Remind me alot like song lyrics though, you should try put it into a song somehow.
I like how you've captured the feelings alot of us go through, thanks for that.
Keep writing,
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