Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 10:38:22 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

2nd thoughts

Contributed by dark_fighter_chick on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

*****, you gona die tonight
I made the plans just right
I'll sneek in your room while your asleep
I make sure to drive the knife in deep
But as I see you lying the sweetly
I can't do it, somehow your stopping me.
But I don't understand why or how.
I can't kill you, but i wanna so bad right now
Joseph, get a grip! It's all in his head
You wanted her gone, you wanted her dead.
Now i'm talkin to someone I can't see
It might be true, but this person isn't me
How the hell could I try and kill you,
I might say I hate you, but it's not true
I can't do it, Damn! I can't do it!
I did, tomarrow, I know I'd regreat it.
I lay the knife donw and head for the door.
Regretin voices that called you a whore
Slowly I leave into the dark of the night
Leaving your live full with light
I get home and into my bed to crawl
About an hour later, I get your phone call
You saw the knife and you shiver in fright.
And you want me to hold you close and tight
Do you know what I tryed to do?
You don't know I tryed to kill you.
I go back, and I hold you tight,
I keep my secret in all night.
I don't know if I'll spill what I tryed to do
I'm sure as hell not gona tell you
I glad I had a chang of mine,
But guilt lingers in the past behind.

Copyright © dark_fighter_chick ... [ 2004-05-09 19:20:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: 2nd thoughts (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 08:26:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wooooo Scary. Excelent write. wow. sends shivers up and down my spine. 5 stars. Great. Write.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com