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My love
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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O' my love, my serenade
I sing to thee, starlights cascade
Thou art so sweet, upon ones lips
Our love shall blossom, from cupids pips
O' my love, ill marry thee
Caress your heart an give thy plea
We shall exist in realms above
Our hearts in heaven, like a glove
O' my love, id die a death
To save your life, my final breath
Forever now, to dance and laugh
O' my love, my other half
Without you I am not complete
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2004-05-09 17:49:21]
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Re: My love
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by Archie on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:59:48 PM AEST
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| This is a very awesome poem, (on line 6 I think you meant to write and you wrote an, on line 11 I think I'd would be better than id) This is one of the best poems I have seen on this site reminicent of a classical poem. I am very impressed. |
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Re: My love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:34:21 PM AEST
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exquistly romantically beautiful, and so sweet luke!! your pen is golden:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My love
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by Big_Hugs on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:32:18 PM AEST
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i was just having a look around the site and stumbled across this, and i'm glad i did. you didn't tell me that you had written this. its fab! i love it. so thankyou!
all my love,
Katharine
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Re: My love
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:46:34 PM AEST
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I really liked this one alot..The last line was something I really know about..
AfterDark.. |
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