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Let Me Live

Contributed by Janae on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:10:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

No matter how much

I try to give,

You won't ever give me

A chance to live.

I gave you my all

But you didn't see,

That I had to have more

Than just you here with me.

My love everlasting

My heart never leers,

Your decision wasn't mutual

And you lead me to tears.

Now I sit here

With my heart in two,

I can wait here forever

Just waiting for you.

But you won't come back

You've continued on already,

As the room starts to spin

I try and keep myself steady.

My heart's work ceases

As I cling onto life,

Don't you realize I can't live without you?

I'm almost tempted to pick up the knife...

But your work is done

There is no need,

As I look at my shirt

You've caused me to bleed.

My heart has gone

And the pain subsides,

I realize the blood

Is leaking from my eyes.

You're the last thing I see

As you wrap your hand in my fingers,

And now all I can hope for

Is that my memory will linger.

You obviously didn't love me

Like I did you,

I know now you see

What you lead me to...

Copyright © Janae ... [ 2004-05-09 16:10:19]
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Re: Let Me Live (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:17:59 PM AEST
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causes my heart to pain so seeing this heartache
I wish for you rainbows and sunshine very soon and all your tears to dry.

Michelle

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