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Beaten Once Too Much
Contributed by
parkman
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:23:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I've been beaten, black and blue
Slapped in the face, with a high heel shoe
Hit on the head, with a dinner plate
All for being, five minutes late
I've had bruises, deeply coloured
Cigarette burns, my body's devoured
Lumps and bumps, everywhere
Nobody knows, they don't care
Women get beat up, everyday
Zero tolerance, make men pay
What about the man, that gets beat up so
Is there anywhere, for him to go
He's the stronger, of the two
Though this isn't, always true
Sometimes afraid, to breakaway
Zero tolerance for men, some day
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-05-09 13:23:55]
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Re: Beaten Once Too Much
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by Archie on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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| That sounds fair to me, though I hope I never get in that kind of situation. I feel sorry for you though |
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Re: Beaten Once Too Much
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:51:14 PM AEST
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| BEEN the one hurt.. You dont have to stay. she wont get no better. no matter what you do or say. I am sorry but i have stayed cause of the kids. what job can i get to take care of them all. your a man. able to work right? leave. I WISH I COULD SAY ALL THIS TO YOU. ITS ALL IN MY MIND. HERE IS A HUG MY FRIEND. KEEP INTOUCH. we all need friends. makes me mad a woman doing this...(MAKES ALL WOMEN LOOK BAD) |
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