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Over a thousand days
Contributed by
DaveHugs
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:05:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sprawled in a septic cell
His poisonous words worthless
And unspoken
The bearded soul counts
By the passing suns
Waiting
Hoping
To breathe free air
Far from his humid hell
Where the devil takes every form
Mocking, glaring and dancing
On his wounds
Copyright ©
DaveHugs
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2004-05-09 11:05:48]
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Re: Over a thousand days
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:20:48 AM AEST
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| This is a great peice of work! Strong! |
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Re: Over a thousand days
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by bernard on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:26:15 AM AEST
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Good strong poem short but powerful.
bernard. |
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Re: Over a thousand days
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by reprobate on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:55:50 PM AEST
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has a count of m.c. feel to it. nice.
thanks for sharing |
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