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The Visiting Ladies
Contributed by
norm
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:17:31 AM in AEST
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Connie came to my house,my wife she wasn't home
Connie kind of said, it was time for me to roam
I explained to Connie I was not that kind of guy
It was time for her to vacate as I looked her in the eye.
Shari came to my house, the Pearl, she was not in
Shari kind of whispered, we could have a little sin
I said to Shari, the Pearl's my only love
I said to Shari, "It's time for you to shove"
Nessa came to my house, Shirl she wasn't there
Nessa said, for gidgy, she had a little flair,
Polite I was to Nessa, a little flattered I,
However, facts are facts, I'd rather have some pie.
Shelby paid a visit, the Whirl was not about
Shelby told me something, I would surely shout
But I told to Shelby, thank you very much
Cookie sweet has told me, look but do not touch.
Ladies, please, you visit, come real close to four
Shirl will make you tea, her, you will adore,
I ain't much, I tell you, a fact I will attest.
Beauties are entitled, to the very best.
Copyright ©
norm
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by bernard on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:24:58 AM AEST
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Another great poem with a beautiful play on names all easily recognisable as members of the YPCD. How do you do it Norm?
Top marks again
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:53:15 AM AEST
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| Norm is back! Sound the bells!!! |
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 10:04:46 AM AEST
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very clever and sweet, norm, wouldnt it be fun if we could all get together? we poetess' will behave, we know its for shirl you rave!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 10:29:12 AM AEST
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| Very wise and enthralling. This is a great story to be told in a poem, and thanks for sharing |
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by Mick_Puttock on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 03:29:56 PM AEST
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| Great to have you back Norm, and thanks for the morning cheer :) |
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:13:23 PM AEST
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glad to see you back
your humor we did lack
just one thing i didn't love
the others got told nicely and i got the shove
Shari |
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:32:53 PM AEST
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Good to see you back and posting, Norm...and with such a beauty!!!
Keep 'em coming...
Jenni |
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Re: The Visiting Ladies
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by Stitch on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:37:41 AM AEST
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If you keep your tongue
within your cheek,
you'll not be able to shout
I'm not sure whether to smile or cry
cause, Norm, you left me out!
Smilin for you!
Stitch |
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