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Behind Your Words
Contributed by
Adreana
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Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When you tell me everything is alright
Do you believe what you are saying?
I can hear a strand of doubt lingering
When you say you can't wait to see me
I'm not so sure it's how you really feel
Prove it.
You speak in a tone sometimes
That gives away your exhaustion
Are you tired of me? Of us?
Like fruit on a tree I am waiting to be picked
First, before all other things in your life
Not because I want it, but because you want me
Tell me if things aren't feeling right
Or tell me that you believe what you have said
All I want is you... and for you to want me
If all is well, assure me all is well... with passionate words
If they are not, tell me with the same passionate words
It is the only way I can believe anything
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Adreana
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2002-10-06 13:00:00]
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Re: Behind Your Words
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 02:25:46 PM AEST
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AAAAMMMMEEENNN!!!!!!!!! It's still amazing to me that my friends think that they can package things up into pretty little packages and think that I won't know the difference... I understand completley where this poem is coming from. Thanks for sharing it! Great write!
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Re: Behind Your Words
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by Necronomy on
Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 02:55:02 PM AEST
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| i too understand this poem; i have been on both sides of the fence. nice write, i did enjoy it. |
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