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The Thudding Of Silent Pain.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:36:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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I’m trying to be happy.
Because it’s your birthday.
Its not that I don’t like you.
Its just today’s a mixed emotions day.
I wish time would stop.
So I could think more.
I need to sort my head out.
Coz I don’t want to go to school tomorrow!
I know it’s your day!
I’m not saying otherwise.
I… just… feel, so… isolated.
I don’t wan to open my eyes.
Time’s expanding but still going fast.
Here I am,
Falling into my past.
I want this to stop,
So I can sort out my head.
The silence is thudding.
I can’t think ahead…
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2004-05-09 06:36:21]
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Re: The Thudding Of Silent Pain.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:32:42 AM AEST
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Denying self to see another person's happiness is always hard
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Re: The Thudding Of Silent Pain.
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by apollo on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 03:00:05 PM AEST
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| be happy! this was a great right about how hard it is sometimes to know what to think when times are tough. this writing compelled me to read it again to reallly understand its meaning, and wow, its wonderful. sometimes things are tough when we try and figure them out, we try and work at it until there is nothing left. and just when we think we found out what we needed, we realized we never knew anything. beautiful write! |
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