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''My View''
Contributed by
amos
on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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"My View"
Do you know do you see
everyone has gone to be
anything they ever wanted
Why don't we follow suit
Why can't we just move
and everything falls into place
All you can say of this is don't look back
this elected path is not
what anyone chose
Here for now, gone forever
tell me now, how can you remember
Every piece of advice
everywhere
everywhere
everywhere
After all we stand no more
you beat against the glass
you pound the invisible wall
your anger is never going to quit
not when you break anything near
shout at the top of your lungs
breathe in the cold mist
Your pain....
IS THE ONLY CHANCE I HAVE
your fear...
IS WHAT BRINGS YOU DOWN
tell me how I can fix
YOU WON'T LAST
Only I can help
Gone from this world I never wanted
Gone from a beating heart you never had
I STAND HERE WAITING
WAITING FOR YOU TO APPEAR
COME APART COME UNDONE
WHEN I'M NOT WITH YOU
WHY IS IT THIS..
WHY WON'T I UNDERSTAND
ANY COST IS ALL YOU CAN
LET THIS BE A CHAOTIC MESS
ALL YOU KNOW
is to fall down..fall away..fall into pieces for me
look around..look around
AND THIS........WILL GO AWAY.
Copyright ©
amos
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2002-10-06 11:00:00]
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Re: ''My View''
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by Rose on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 12:00:09 PM AEST
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then all you can do is just be there, and listen,and hope to keep harm to that one and anyone else. Just listen, just be there, and let it all be vented out. its help that one needs, but until that one can see, all you can do is just listen and be there.... sorry this is happening, but being the way you are, is the best you can do for your friend and you. I hope all can work out. take care
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Re: ''My View''
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 02:29:31 PM AEST
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And all you can do is just be a shoulder, lend an ear, and wipe the tears away when they inevitably fall. I know that you probably don't understand what is going on with your friend right now (is this the same friend that just started using drugs??), but if you are there, then gradually you can bring your friend back into reality. Just be there, that's all anyone can ever do. You can't make him stop that self-destruction, but you can be the light that he needs at the end of a tunnel... Great write. I can feel the pain in it.
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Re: ''My View''
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by amos on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 03:15:17 PM AEST
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| thanks for the comments..and thanks for liking some of my stuff Gins..I appreciate it! =) |
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