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Forever Youthful

Contributed by surfer_boy_lost on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:29:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I want to sing it to the world,
All these feelings i wouldn't dare,
Lighter than a bird soaring,
Just knowing that you care.
A laugh, a bliss, a simple joy,
Whenever i think about you
And your beauty, in face and soul
I'm on centre stage needing no cue.

If everything could be as wonderful
As the joy you bring to life,
Then it seems this world, forever youthful
Would fail to impose strife.

Sitting on the slanted roof,
Of the houses, watching crystal
Everything is alive and for you it dances
As if the world's darkest matters little.
Running through the foam
Tickling on feet and heart
Everything trivial, on a whim
This feeling, i know, is only at the start.

If everything could be as wonderful
As the joy you bring to life,
Then it seems this world, forever youthful
Would fail to impose strife.

The blue fades to pink
Through many an emotion.
We part through purple fading
Only to be left with amythst ocean.
All the time in the world,
Yet it all seemed so brief,
So much that we created,
I now see why God was theif.

If everything could be as wonderful
As the joy you bring to life,
Then it seems this world, forever youthful,
Would fail to impose strife.

The darkest night, deep and forever,
Lights once shone, now burnt out.
But there is one smallest glimmer
Where you live i don't doubt.
Sitting on the slanted roof,
Of the houses, watching crystal,
The world begins to shape again,
Without you though, somtimes fickle.

If everything would be as wonderful,
As the joy you brought to life,
Then it seems this world, forever youthful,
Would fail to cause more strife.

Copyright © surfer_boy_lost ... [ 2004-05-09 02:29:52]
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Re: Forever Youthful (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:04:34 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem very much. It was a nice write. To read between the lines, makes a nice poem. Keep writing, your words are beautiful

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