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A Peaceful Dream
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:17:27 AM in AEST
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A beautiful setting set in front of me
Of you sleeping on my bed
Where you ought to be
While dreaming a dream
Maybe even of me
Touching your face
As I whisper to you in your sleep
Although you don't answer
I get the response that I want
That you'll lay there peacefully
As I humbly watch
My love drift in her dream
With her precious thoughts flowing
Just like a stream
As your perfection is showing
I'll sit at the bedside
With my hand holding yours
Smiling at you
Just before
I kiss you on your forehead
And you gently move
As if you just felt
My heart flow into this dream of yours
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Re: A Peaceful Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:26:01 AM AEST
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Beautiful write....loved it...
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Re: A Peaceful Dream
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:44:34 PM AEST
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great poem! I can almost see the scene unfold in front of me! I especially like the way you end it-
'I kiss you on your forehead
And you gently move
As if you just felt
My heart flow into this dream of yours'
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