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dead insdie
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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im dead inside and the blood drips down my broken heart and my bloody tears cry
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Re: dead insdie
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:04:10 AM AEST (User
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Here is a hanky to dry the tears.
Here is some glue for the broken heart
may the reason why you hurt so bad
comes again and brings a new start.....
SHORT YES. BUT TO THE POINT AND GREAT WRITE.... sandy |
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Re: dead insdie
(User Rating: 1 ) by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:09:18 AM AEST (User
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Mend a broken heart, and dry a tear, there is always tomorrow and someone new and dear. |
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Re: dead insdie
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stormydwn on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:44:50 AM AEST (User
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Too much pain for one soul. |
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Re: dead insdie
(User Rating: 1 ) by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:30:33 PM AEST (User
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mmmm........this is the first time I read your poems and almost all of them are about suicide!!! This is so sad and almost scary, surely you must been though something terrible.......well I would like to encourage you to look at the brighter side of life but I am sure lots people done that already, so I will just pray and wish for you a better tomorrow.........be strong.......... |
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Re: dead insdie
(User Rating: 1 ) by DirtyFool on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:57:40 PM AEST (User
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Short but very deep! |
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Re: dead insdie
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 06:02:44 PM AEST (User
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You're not dead yet. Your heart, though deeply wounded, lives still. I know this because you still write. Please, be hopefull. Perhaps tomorrow may not be a better day, but looking at it as if it were makes the difference of how you start your day.
Take care.
David |
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