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DADDY DEER

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:54:12 PM in AEST
Topic: oops


































~Linda's Signatures~






Dennis, once my son-in-law
U say U luv our little Ty,
U spit fire into
Dee's ocean blue eyes.
Pushing her into life
on her own,
my, my?

You can't luv Ty-n-push
his mom, away.
Daddy deer, oh daddy deer
There's laws that will
bring u down for
u don't live up to your own divorce decree!
oh man!

U judge her and beat
her down but
she's up now.
Look around!

U was sexing her best friend
pointing fingers.
Oh me!

Your own selfish
pride is making
a monkey of u.
Can't u see?

So let's get to
nitty, gritty son.
Get ready 'cause
the judge will tighten
your screws,
See son?

Sonny, Sonny, Sonny,
My, my you've so
much to learn.
Dee's thru, done!

What was a roll in the hay for you
brought, Dylon
your magnetic son.

I know you're a desent
dad
'cause Dylon says so.
He's such a brite
star lite straite
from God's own heart.

Daddy deer you aren't
to smart hitting
his mom
straite thru her heart!

When God wants us on our knees
he gives us family.
I understand out
of control, blinded
by the sun's glow.
2 witnesses at the
last fit u throwed!

Take that energy eating
you away let it go
live free 2 day!
Yes ripped he heart
wide open
bleeding her soul!
All you did was
critasize on-n-on.
Well she's Swedish,
Indian,
German etc,
blonde bumb shell
all the way Country gal.
5 ft. 3inch, 102 lb., petite
but her faith is
embedded a billon
feet deep!

She worked her butt off
that last Winter,
supported herself
Dylon-n-U.
U continually called
her lazy slob
in front of Dylon-n-Tyler,
oh God!

Now both u guys
might as well
get it right
'cause judge want like
these odds.
Alright!

She works three jobs now
to bye her home
and supports Dylon!
Give it up boys
Jesus will deal with you
It's time to follow your own crooked rules!

You can't luv your son's
and toture eagerly their mom!
Luv don't work this way
so pay attention to what I
say!
Shape up now 'cause
next time judge's gonna
hear it all!
Daddy deer listen here!
Watch out 'cause
perfect luv has no fear!
Yeah, God!

Dee is very strong in-luv
but these guys can't handle
that muck!

Give it up boys 'cause
my baby girl ain't
no toy!
Your own in-securities
will eventually tear
you down. It once
happened to me,
a clown, see?

Hardness of heart tis
it's own disguise
will some day open your eyes!







? Emy Star
01 Sept 2003






Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-05-08 22:54:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:54:17 PM AEST
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Very Sad Emy !!!! Very Heartfelt Out Pouring Powerful Emotional Words !!!!!!!!!!
You Tell Him G/F !!!!!! You Have Written This Very Good ...... But One Thing Is He Has To Prove Her As An Unfit Mother Before A Judge Will Give Him Custody !!!! And I'm Sure Her Being Your Daughter She's An Outstanding Loving , Caring Mother Like You...
Love Ya Emy And You And Your Daughter Are In My Prayers Hun !!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
******************************


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:22:07 AM AEST
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They have the strength and love from you and a family who knows the truth, smiles from heaven to set it right, this I pray on this very night.


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:43:30 AM AEST
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You tell 'im grrl.....best of luck on Tuesday!!!
Hugs
Jenni


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:09:55 AM AEST
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I am praying for you all. It is so sad to watch a grown man act so selfish and try to destroy his own childs love and respect for his mother. He will pay for his miserable deeds.

Hugs,
Rita


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:41:38 AM AEST
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Oh Emy I see so much of this happening today. He doesn't really love his little boy, he just wants to have him so child support he won't have to pay.
It's in God's hands now, and I will certainly be praying for you........
If the Judge is fair at all........he will never take
her son from her. But brace yourself just incase Emy dear. I've seen mean judges do it before.
I love you.....please know how I care.
Hugs
love
momconsue


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:39:00 AM AEST
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This is a very sad situation all too common for our families anymore. Putting the children in the middle and playing tag, is so difficult for the kids. I wish you well in this struggle for your daughter and grandchildren Emy, my thoughts and prayers will be in my heart. The adults of such situations do know better, but one or both, don't seem to consider the children they brought into this world, of thier feelings. As I beleive, I was brought up "ole School", and it should be this way still. Old fashioned, yes I am, but morals, values, respect and integrity and scrupples, are important in ones life, as the mate you choose should share them. The hurts of this situation will go and reprocuss of the childs life, and will be a stigma always in thier life. I know this, for I am a product of such a situation. Take care, Emy, and my prayers with you and your family. Such emotion and thought into your write, well written.
Amber Rose Yeager
Rose @->-->>-


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:57:13 AM AEST
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oh emy this is so sad, beautifully written but ohhh so sad, my heart goes out to you and your daughter and grandson, please let me know how your holding up and whats happening, big hugs big love, nessa
@->>->-


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 03:13:35 PM AEST
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Oh Emystar!
I posted something this morning, but it looks it did not go through.
Emystar I am aggrieved about your situation and I will pray for you that this sad situation will be turned around.
I am sure the Lord will help.
With my love
Elizabeth Dandy


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:15:46 PM AEST
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Emy, I can feel the anger in this write. I hope things are ok now. *S* Cynthia


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 04:22:14 AM AEST
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My prayers are with you all good luck.

wildejohnny.


Re: DADDY DEER (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:20:17 AM AEST
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im sorry your family and your grandchildren have to go through this... divorces are hard... and even worse when the parents dont get along after the fact and put the kids in the center... sometimes i think its like a game... to see who can hurt eachother the worse... trust me... ive been the victum of divorces and ***** parents....my parents still dont get along ... wont talk to eachother ... and used me and my brother has a ploy to get back at one another... hopefully your ex son in law grows the ***** up and realizes what he is doing to his kids... and that if he really loved them then he would let them make their own decisions regardless how old they are... and let them still have a mom




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