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Silver paved path to hell
Contributed by
aeris
on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Quietly in the corner,
I cry, I sit.
Pouring through the window,
The moons dim light is lit.
I stare blankly,
with aw, and fear.
Realizing my time of judgment is neer.
Silver fire,
can end my pain.
I'm under the wire,
Without any shame.
This is my purpose,
this is my path.
The chrimson river,
comes flowing fast.
Now further i stumble,
into the shade.
My body grows weiry,
my eyes all tearly,
yet I am not afraid.
Because i know even bad things must come to an end.
It's just another bend, in the road,
on my path to self destruction,
I've caused no obstruction,
except for my life.
I was not ment to be here,
but now what's to be done is clear.
Silver fire,
hath ended my pain,
I was under the wire,
without any gain,
This was my purpose,
this was my path,
now hell's dorrs,
have opened, atlast.
Copyright ©
aeris
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2002-10-06 10:00:00]
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Re: Silver paved path to hell
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by hot_topic on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 07:04:27 AM AEST
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| u have a special talent to write! i love it! and i can tell that u are also trying to express things to ppl more easier. u know sometimes i wonder if any-one out there really understands. my life is not going very well right now. and my attitude has changed from quiet to angry. i have so much anger in my life so i express them in poetry except sometimes i express them out loud. for example........ i cuss alot and i've stuck up my middle finger so much. my friends cuss all the time so i learn it from them all the time since i am around them alot. one time i could have gone to jail. its just....ppl judge me on how i live and act. but anyway, ur poem is very good. look for some of my poems that i have put out! they are either under....dark poetry or angry poetry! L8ER |
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Re: Silver paved path to hell
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by frozensuicide on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:43:57 PM AEST
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hey, this is a very good poem... i like the title. its very beautiful. thanks for sharing it with us and glad your optimistic now.
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Re: Silver paved path to hell
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by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:18:53 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem.... |
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