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Beneath The Sea
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:27:21 PM in AEST
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let's do something
so unlike us and
go to the ocean
for the summer
walk along the beach
holding hands
feel the warm sand
beneath our feet
we'll don our
wetsuits and explore
beneath the sea
eat shrimp and ice cream
whenever we please
leave behind our
normal day to day lives
forget all of our worries
if only for a while
Copyright ©
faithmairee
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2004-05-08 21:27:21]
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Re: Beneath The Sea
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:13:42 PM AEST
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Wonderful thoughts of escaping for a while. Enjoyed it.
The Voice
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Re: Beneath The Sea
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:16:50 PM AEST
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| Ice cream under the sea....that's a vivid picture. Lol, a pleasant read and a wild concept. I loved it |
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Re: Beneath The Sea
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:17:34 AM AEST
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Ah.....this is lovely.... this is my everyday life.....
(that's why I am so fat---the ice-cream)..lol
Jenni |
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Re: Beneath The Sea
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:23:01 AM AEST
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Aren't fantasies delightful. Gives us some place to go to when we are bored or lonely. Mine is at the top of a mountain with a beautiful melted ice stream and all the wild animals around. Big roaring fire and lots of hot coffee laced with brandy. LOL
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Re: Beneath The Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:14:49 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet and romantic, faith, great write! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Beneath The Sea
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:22:58 AM AEST
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Nice vivid picture of a wishful future during summertime.
I'm not too keen on shrimp and ice cream though - I'd probably throw up . . .
Keep writing, |
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