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Disentegrating My Heart
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:49:45 PM in AEST
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I'm not someone to backstab
I'm not someone to steal your dream away
You're the one who loved her first
I'm just someone selfish who came along,
looking for what he is not meant to have
But now I'm saying so long...
To all my feelings of love
To all of my useless words
I'm killing off everything in me
So I will not hurt you
I'm sorry friend I must say,
I'm praying that her love will come your way
And you will send me all your pain
So that you can be happy everyday
I guess that I should say this to you now
That I am saying good bye...
To all of my burning love
To all my passionate words
I am disentegrating my heart
So I will not hurt you
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
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2004-05-08 20:49:45]
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Re: Disentegrating My Heart
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:06:03 PM AEST
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| Great write! This is good! |
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Re: Disentegrating My Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:05:24 AM AEST
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This is a very unselfish act....the mark of a true friend....
Great write....
Jenni |
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Re: Disentegrating My Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:13:26 PM AEST
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ohhh everette, this is a very moving poem, so sad, hugs, smiles n' love nessa
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Re: Disentegrating My Heart
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:28:56 AM AEST
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this is a very sad, emotional, moving poem.
very well done.
Arden |
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Re: Disentegrating My Heart
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by SourPatchGurl on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:20:13 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem! |
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Re: Disentegrating My Heart
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:27:19 PM AEST
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| This poem got me all emotional! It's really good! |
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