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Turned Ignorance
Contributed by
SilentPwn
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:08:40 PM in AEST
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So here I go again,
speaking your words of ignorance.
I really do care about this world,
I care for it to go down in flames, burnt..
My blood stains on my shirt,
from what this world does, concerned
for myself, not for others.
Here now, I've lived well, covered..
From light that dwells within.
..Shown darkness that'll rise again.
I have no idea of what to think..
..No idea of what to believe.
Confusion is majority, while sense fades.
I'll lay here and think within my cave.
They never seem to care.
..Never seem to notice I'm not there.
I care for one person, and I'd die for you.
This torpid world is false, but true.
I wash away my fears with tears of hope.
I'd die with you, if I weren't so soaked..
in regret for betraying you with my words of ignorance.
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SilentPwn
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2004-05-08 20:08:40]
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Re: Turned Ignorance
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:58:55 PM AEST
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This is very interesting. If you really feel this way, drop me a pm. If you have extended yourself in this, bravo, you've created something intriguing.
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Re: Turned Ignorance
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:00:10 PM AEST
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| Very good! You have such a way with words! |
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Re: Turned Ignorance
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:20:10 PM AEST
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Very powerful! Mixed emotions. Enjoyed greatly.
The Voice
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Re: Turned Ignorance
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by hotrod55 on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:53:17 PM AEST
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| Great Write. point gose to u. |
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Re: Turned Ignorance
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:05:44 AM AEST
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| this was amazing. i can really relate. |
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