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Like Paper
Contributed by
IamChrisHuff
on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 07:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My soul is spread out
Like butter spread
Over too much bread.
Like paper
without anything
to bear down on.
Like eating salt
by itself.
Like talking to
the wall,
not even
yourself.
Like understanding
what's being said,
when all is quiet.
Like paper
without anything
to bear down on.
Copyright ©
IamChrisHuff
... [
2004-05-08 19:02:36]
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Re: Like Paper
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:32:17 PM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot and it says much too. Very nice and detailed for being short and I could taste salt and i thought this was was very well done. Nice Write!!! |
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Re: Like Paper
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by Alli on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 10:19:45 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful, simple, but says so much. |
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Re: Like Paper
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:00:34 AM AEST
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| amazingly beautiful. |
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